Like deja vu

[twist]

You're like deja vu
I've seen your face before somewhere
Your words are familiar like an echo from long ago

As if you knew my mother
My sister and brother
You're like deja vu

I watch you and forget to blink
Your every smile and gesture
I've been here before

[twist]

You're like deja vu
I've seen your face before somewhere
Your words are familiar like an echo from long ago


Does this sound better than the original 1st verse?

[cacian]

You're like deja vu
I've seen your face before somewhere
Your words are familiar like an echo from long ago


Does this sound better than the original 1st verse?

the second one is best.

[PeterL]

Human Deja Vu

You humans are all the same
Whether sister, mother, brother,
Or even grandfather or grand-daughter
You are still humans with the same genes
Brains, and bodies are all of one plan
With minor variations for fun and more.
Yes, you are deja vu all over again.

[twist]

Thank you Cacian! I appreciate your advice and have changed it accordingly.