flamboyant

[cacian]

when it hurts
you know how it curts
tears be birds
fly away heard
wash away absurd
forgetful disturbs

but when it is good
you know how it stood
no feeling like
it
epitomise it
would
but to long last it
hood
it is to vent it
should.

[YesNo]

I liked the lines with the "good-stood" rhyme. An interesting way to describe what is good as there being no feeling like it.

[cacian]

I liked the lines with the "good-stood" rhyme. An interesting way to describe what is good as there being no feeling like it.

YesNo thank you very much for reading :)