Sleeping Through the Fire

[Lykren]

*****

[NikolaiI]

It's really great Lykren - transcendental and beautiful. One line, part of the last line - as earth the water and the water - I didn't fully understand, but having one part obscure doesn't lessen the beauty of it as a whole in the least.

It's very pleasing as a poem.. Quite impressive, it shows you have talent and insight.. You can do anything in poetry, and I hope you reach all of your goals with it.

[Lykren]

Thank you NikolaiI. The last line is a reference to the opening lines of Genesis.