earth

[cacian]

the planet
is full of people
when one goes in
the other comes out
that is the rule of
kin
don't try
and be thin
you would not see
a pin
from a lin
crowded does not win.

[YesNo]

I liked the idea of one going out when another went into the planet full of people.

[cacian]

YesNo thank you very much for reading :)

[Mohammad Ahmad]

I would always like to be thin but not to be fastened with pin then what shall I win?
It maybe I empty handed coming back nevertheless my Twin
Thank you Cacian, delighting words made me asleep not

[cacian]

I would always like to be thin but not to be fastened with pin then what shall I win?
It maybe I empty handed coming back nevertheless my Twin
Thank you Cacian, delighting words made me asleep not

haha a nice feedback Mohammad thank you :)