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mr.gestapu
11-05-2014, 05:26 AM
My english is not so good, but I have to write some lines to university. i want to you check my lines and inform me about mistakes. That lines these are:
Most respected dear, I have applied to........ (university name), sending by T.C.S (courier company) which has received by Mohsin on 10/19/2014 11:35:00 AM. My question is that when university publish the list of acceptance.
Please help me friends........
Have a good day to everyone.

mr.gestapu
11-05-2014, 01:15 PM
Is this right?
Dear Sir/Madam, I have applied at University of ......... (Or .....,....... University), sending by T.C.S which has now been received by Mohsin on the 19th October 2014. I am just wondering when the university will publish the list of acceptance?

mr.gestapu
11-06-2014, 10:29 AM
Guys ! I need your help, Please