morning

[cacian]

in the morning
light
enters soaring
through my windows
roaring
every inch of decoring
room and flooring
strike euphoring
to wake up is adoring.

[PeterL]

The morning Sun sneaks up and slowly,
Stealthily it fills the world again.
Midnight blue sky pales to deep indigo.
East to West the world turns from indigo
To pale blue and the whites and pinks of cloud.

By then the garbage trucks have roared and clanged
Enough for an armored brigade,
And I'm busily sipping coffee.

[Delta40]

Your best yet.

[YesNo]

I liked all the -oring rhymes and the positive ending.

[Mohammad Ahmad]

Himm, Good words, but how Light roaring!
I have never heard that light roars, often it is for animal like lion, tiger, and wild cat..etc...
For a man also it maybe used when he turned wild in his behavior, for light it can't be used ( how it roars through the window!) light always is slight and soft it can't be rough.
No, no it can't be roaring, it it something forever producing happiness to our souls, just I like to express about my view.

[cacian]

thank you all so much for reading :)

[cacian]

Himm, Good words, but how Light roaring!
I have never heard that light roars, often it is for animal like lion, tiger, and wild cat..etc...
For a man also it maybe used when he turned wild in his behavior, for light it can't be used ( how it roars through the window!) light always is slight and soft it can't be rough.
No, no it can't be roaring, it it something forever producing happiness to our souls, just I like to express about my view.
hi Mohammad i figured it is always nice to exaggerate in poetry because that is the only you can get away with it ;)