Mayst thou a wing help me to fly?

[Mohammad Ahmad]

Mayst thou a wing help me to fly?
Then I sigh deeply as a bird in the sky
Mayst thou a desert consume my gloom?
To wherever should I look I see a new bloom.
Are you not a sincere fellow lovely I deem?
Selfishly you think ignoring my young dream
Then you depart me and never say good-by
As a bird just eats my grain and soon fly
Mayst thou give me a thin soul in my breath?
Nay you smoked it as a heavy wetted wreath.
Mayst thou a pink rose thrive in my garden?
With every smell I shall thank and pardon
Didst thou not a letter in my verse I read!
Then you are as water quenchable may I need.
Didst you come to me one night and say!
When I don’t see you, never I have day.
Then you are the traitor after this and that
Alas I furnished my soul for you to be a flat

[Delta40]

Romantic and I laughed especially at the last line because of its witty tragedy. This kind of language is appreciated where the mood takes me and I like the rhyme and meter too.

[Mohammad Ahmad]

Romantic and I laughed especially at the last line because of its witty tragedy. This kind of language is appreciated where the mood takes me and I like the rhyme and meter too.
Thank Delta, indeed I feel happy when I see that you encourage me and indeed I shall try to produce writing the better, really I am enjoyed in poetry and without writing i feel as if I am imprisoned.
Also if you find any mistake in my language I would thank you if you tell me thus you have the right to correct for me.
You are a real friend I am indebted to you