You...!!

[Sumz Nini]

Memories are sweet,
sweet and live.
Images of you,
fresh and smooth,
i wonder again and again,
how my imaginations
get clear and clear,
when you flies from me ,
miles away.

In a one more second,
image blurs,
knowing that,
you will no more be here.

In mornings I hear your greetings,
No it's the hum of the bees,
In evenings I hear your singing,
No it's the tune of the crickets.

I see your smile in winter,
and your shining eyes in summer,
But the world say,
it is a snowflake
dancing on my hand,
and it is the shining sun
peeping from a cloud..

But I know I always hear your thoughts,
Oh
may be that's the yearning of my soul......

[Bar22do]

Hey Nini, I'm neither a critic, nor a poetry teacher, certainly not a poet (though I do sin with it from time to time). So I can only share my thoughts that might be all wrong, of course.

I'd go here for more words economy and would contain "You" in something like that (in your style, not mine):

Images of you,
always fresh,
though you flew far
and won't return

Now I hear
your morning greetings
in the hum of the bees
In the winter, your smile
is a snowflake.

And our eyes meet, as we fix them
on the shining sun.

Well, that's the best I can do, anyway. Good luck with your writing, Nini!

Best from Bar

[Delta40]

I rather like the effervescent style. No, it's the hum of the bees etc. There are some grammar errors but the poem clearly bubbles with blind love!

[Sumz Nini]

Thank You for your comments Bar & Delta40 .. :) Yeah Delta40 i'll correct that mistake..