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Mohammad Ahmad
10-11-2014, 12:17 PM
Give me breath again

Canst you as an intaglio to me repair?
Then my scourge should have an animate air.
Eagerly I do to your response not as a maddest one.
As cattle would be conscious, when willingly run.
Canst you not understand me even not straight?
Like the falcons invade my sky to veil my sunlight.
Your phantom asks me to be used up gracious.
Ah! Alas, a vantage comes orderly vicious.
What sticks you to my place as a pining roomer?
If not we are as nephrons of kidney intimate neighbour!
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Poem-2

Creatures & Fate

Except Allah, everything will die
No creature to God's order could deny
This life is as if ashes blowing by wind
No doubt, however prolonged, it has end.
You go and return knowing not where your fate.
Amazingly or involvedly for trifle things you debate
As an entrapping may come of an unfathomable danger
Then everything will be amplified in an excessive order
Universe should then turn for another changeable universe
Earth, sky, stars, moon, and sun should be orderly diverse.
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Delta40
10-14-2014, 07:11 PM
I like the first one more. Probably because I'm reading 19th century plays at the moment and am captured by the language.

Mohammad Ahmad
10-15-2014, 12:41 PM
I like the first one more. Probably because I'm reading 19th century plays at the moment and am captured by the language.
Thank you Delta to come back again, you are politely gracious