At the gipsy camp

[Mohammad Ahmad]

Once we went for a gipsy camp
Spread out in a distant place
A snowy day and we are cold
A time was evening and we had to sleep
No one invited us to eat or drink
A fire we made near their cutting slabs
We had to gather to be as one
In that time, we heard a loudly music,
Like rapping tambourine sounds, it had come.
We soon leaped to be closely as much.
And the dance really enhances our souls
So to speak, we came nearest at once
In each side, you had to see a girl
Very pretty as a moon in its fourteenth day
Putting closely her hand with another hand
And the party took over the place as much it be.
One of our fellows enthusiastically shared them.
Betokened to the star one giving her his hand
As feet of raging oxen plowing up the ground
Nothing to hear but the footfalls of dancers
At a midst of time, we heard a shot
It comes near back where we had to sleep.
They accused us that we are troublemakers.
And at once they fetching on a judge
He looked that we are strange
We were free then and never come back.

[Spotted Fever]

hmm interesting it seems like a tale of searching for freedom. enjoying social connections and the visions that are a part of it. concluding with what seems to others a strange form of celebration being accepted by a "judge" (who could or could not represent the populace or society as a whole) who could have damned them all. i really enjoyed it. grasping what you were trying to convey was a little difficult because of your accent so please let me know if my understanding of your piece is correct. thanks for sharing and i hope to see more of your work posted for all to see on this magnificent forum :)

[Mohammad Ahmad]

First, I would like to welcome you in my page
Second, even though the internet was cut off since the day of my last post here ,however,I would like to apologize because of the late responding and replying.
Third, I think we always need " judge' especially in our current life because everyone would say " I am on right" and no one would admit that he is the sinner.
Now if you look to our area, you might see that it is soughed on a widespread burning and caused in a severe struggle and the fire is going not to exclude any! And it is likely going to burn down the green and the dry, moreover it would be spread to include all the world, and now the imposing question of the asker: who is the winner?