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Lykren
09-21-2014, 10:42 PM
blacked out into dust

empty fruit of the new
way you walk around town

starlight curling behind your eyes

like good air
between tired walls
just as you say
goodnight to the world

and the fury you
never leave behind
until the day of

tailor STATELY
09-22-2014, 01:16 PM
Liked this line very much: "starlight curling behind your eyes".

The ultimate line "until the day of" is compelling.

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor STATELY

Lykren
09-23-2014, 02:27 AM
Thanks.