Empty as hell

[RainbowVeins]

Pour me a cup of that
The thing that’s made you the way you are
See I want to be that way
The way you are
And you know how
Pour me a cup of yourself
Give me a part of you
I’m empty as hell
And you have more than enough to spare
So pour me a cup of something
Anything
I’m empty as hell.

[YesNo]

It occurred to me that one can put "as hell" onto just about anything. Interesting poem and welcome. I guess emptiness is somewhat based on a comparison to those who happen to be around and seem more full.

There are some poetry contests here you might be interested in joining.

[Spotted Fever]

that desperate search to belong, to be "filled". either because you were always empty or because something drained you... connect with this one on many levels. great job!

[tonywalt]

Good one!

[qimissung]

I like it.

[Jerrybaldy]

I really enjoyed this. Look forward to reading more from you.