something

[cacian]

many come
in many goes
amongst due
some do
and others don't
but life
shows
time
filters
slows
through
shivers blue
ancient appears
new
and a minute silent
blew
to exist is true.

[PeterL]

It is all maya, illusion, semblence.
Nothing but mind, pure thought is really there.
Like the image of worms crawling through mud
Are people wandering though their lives.
Naked thought, not the material world,
Is what truly exists, the minds of the Gods.
We and all are just dreams dreamed by the Gods,
And what more could anything want to be?

[YesNo]

I liked endings of both of these.