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teggie
08-15-2014, 03:22 AM
Listen closely, for my words comes loosely but firm as we begin to learn.
I am speaking of a new tomorrow.
Let go of your sorrows. Let go of your fears.
No need for tears.
What I bring is love.
I come as a dove to bring easy to tough.
What is meant of you?
Do you stand tall and true? Well, now is the time to draw your line, clear your mind, prepare to dine.
We are going to feast.
Time to eat the beast.
The beast of corruption and its uncontained eruption.
Swallow it whole and digest it with your soul.
Now, stay steady above the coal and you begin to see your true role.
You are a child of love, you are meant to soar above.
We all wear our own special gloves each that never tear and stay tough.
Grab onto the rope of my wisdom, and climb with hope to your kingdom.
Along the way, keep a smile on your face.
Spread cheer and cheer will mirror.
Love your sisters and your brothers of earth.
Praise your fathers and mothers for what their worth.
Aim for the stars and you will be taken far.
Give what you wish and take what you need.
Be a light for this, your farm of seeds.
Warm them as they seek and blossoming minds push you to the peak.
Raised arms will carry you higher as your kindness ignites an inner fire.
These flames will rise and bring life to a long-awaited prize.
From the ashes, rise with the masses, and as history passes, sanctify heaven from hell with love as your weapon or spell.
My brothers and sisters of liberation, no more contemplation.
It is time for our perfect nation.

You know who your are.

tailor STATELY
08-15-2014, 03:45 AM
Quite ambitious. "What is this?"... a challenge I deem.

L3 might benefit from losing the word "of" in both instances. "blossumed" perhaps a poetic license taken ? "spell" might be a reach for the faithful.

"eat the beast" and what follows in that vein makes me a bit queasy... I'll have to chew on this a bit. Otherwise my first impression is favorable.

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor STATELY