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DieterM
07-24-2014, 08:51 AM
Sweeping, I am always sweeping
the muddy, red ground in front of our hut,
and singing songs of love and longing,
of ecstasy and muggy nights,
songs that only our skinny goats can hear
in the loneliness of the rough, green mountains

By and by, my skin has turned as dark as yours
while the days float by
and die, one by one, like mayflies,
and rain veils percolate from a leaky, white sky,
and sometimes a yellow glow pierces the morning haze,
and sometimes our chilly evenings gleam,
orange and ginger,
into a lightless night

You wear white smiles
and strong perfumes:
fresh coffee, berbere and mitmita;
together, we grind the teff for our daily injera,
prepare a skillet full of doro wat,
clap our hands

The first day, I've been bold and stupid, saying,
‘You and your people never really entered history.
Your present is too full of nostalgia
for the lost paradise of childhood
to leave room for progress.’
Showing me your big teeth,
you've just laughed,
‘I prefer our stories to your history.’

And then, you've started telling me
tales of foxes and hyenas,
travellers and brides,
donkeys and mules,
leopards, apes,
baboons and trees,
and weeks have turned into months,
springs into autumns,
and my hair has turned grey,
and my voice as gentle,
my lips as welcoming,
my smile as wide and warm
as yours

AuntShecky
07-26-2014, 03:23 PM
Interesting one, D.

Is "Simien" a pun on "simian?" I notice the allusions to ape species in the text of your poem. Have you ever read "His Monkey Wife" by John Collier?

Incidentally, my grandson begged his mother to let him see the latest "Planet of the Apes" movie, but my daughter denied his request for the reason that he was too young for such a violent movie. (His age is in the lower single digits.) His argument: "Well, it's only about monkeys!"

I know that your poem is about much more.

DieterM
07-28-2014, 02:52 AM
Dear auntie,

thanks for reading :smile5: I have to admit that I do not know neither John Collier nor the book you were talking of. Anyway, I'm glad to tell you a bit more about this poem's background. The title has (almost) nothing to do with apes; almost because, if my (TV-)memory can be trusted, there are quite a lot of Gelada baboons living there. As a matter of fact, the Simien mountains are part of the Ethiopian Highlands. The word "Semien" comes from the ancient language Amharic. But let's not pretend I know all this stuff and let's just quote my main source for this, ie wikipedia: "Although the word Semien means "north" in Amharic, according to Richard Pankhurst the ancestral form of the word actually meant "south" in Ge'ez, because the mountains lay to the south of Aksum, which was at the time the center of Ethiopian civilization. But as over the following centuries the center of Ethiopian civilization itself moved to the south, these mountains came to be thought of as lying to the north, and the meaning of the word likewise changed."
(http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Simien_Mountains)

I've been listening to a lot of Ethiopian music from the 60s and 70s lately; there was a very lively and interesting jazz scene in that country back then, as I found out (I especially recommend Mulatu Astatke: "Yekermo Sew", and Mahmoud Ahmed: "Ere Mela Mela", simply wonderful). And what with the sizzling hot weather and those entrancing tunes in my headphones, I came up with this little poem. Did my bit of research concerning typical spices and food as well as Ethiopian fairy tales and legends, and worked in some lines from the (in)famous speech the former French president (good riddance) Mr Sarkozy had held in Dakar, Senegal, in 2007, where he pronounced this total stupidities I've translated in the direct speech of the narrator. That's why the woman answers by laughing and by putting forth the long tradition many African peoples have and which contrasts so starkly with the idiotic ignorance and Euro-centricity of the narrator?

I hope these lines are of some help to you.

deletedilute
07-28-2014, 08:59 PM
I love this poem. The easiest way in which I """judge""" (Problematic vocab) poetry is deciding if I would want to know the poet as a person after reading (my need to know e. e. cummings is urgent and very real) - and you really did that for me.

Would recommend you to check out Susan Griffin's A Chorus of Stones - Always interesting to see how poetry lovers work with nonfiction texts. It's definitely a great read despite the cover. Also I think you two would see eye to eye on the idea of history.

Thank you for this poem. People like you fill my heart with songs I can't stop humming.