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cacian
07-16-2014, 04:34 AM
at the bottom
of my garden
a tree
it looks like a real
me
tall imposing and keen
only it doesn't have a key
it doesn't see
the wonders
to the other me
Alice is peeved
it wishes it leave
would it indeed!

YesNo
07-16-2014, 08:19 AM
I liked the sound of this one, especially the last three lines, and the idea of the tree being similar to the person looking at it.

cacian
07-16-2014, 09:11 AM
YesNo thank you.
anything about Alice is worth writing about :)