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MystyrMystyry
07-12-2014, 08:07 PM
early I wake up
a dream about the island
jumble off the sofa

all the usual morning things
the grumbling mutterings
eggs and bacon
crispy buttered toast
orange juice

about to tuck in
when I hear a whump
go to fetch the Daily Drivel
(for the crossword)

I finish up
pile the dishes
in the sink
flip a breath mint
ready for the world

sneak over the fence
to return the paper
when suddenly the heavens open

race to the bus shelter
but
I am inexplicably hit
by a random
bolt of lightning

it hurts
especially around
my eyeballs

it also strangely tickles
as my body flashes bright blue
and briefly I see
my skeleton
stroboscoping

hours pass
or seem to
but after
I'll be told
it was
only a
fraction of a

second

cacian
07-13-2014, 06:16 AM
interesting piece Mystyr.
I like these lines

sneak over the fence
to return the paper
when suddenly the heavens open

it is a very detailed morning routine and so I am guessing it is either Saturday or sunday.

can I ask what is zap?

MystyrMystyry
07-16-2014, 12:24 AM
Thankyou Cacian! :)

Zap - as in electrical zap

Also like if you put your leftovers in a microwave instead of an oven - zapped