confession

[cacian]

life is perfect
it gives more
we take
it does not matter for
we guess
that is a way of
less
to content
we desire most
and to be
we acquire
lost
we expire.
that's life
that's not
that is us in a
rot
to confessions
got
and to a long time ago
dot.
happy I am lot.

[PeterL]

I confess. That one is rather good.

[cacian]

I confess. That one is rather good.

PeterL thank you :)

[PeterL]

PeterL thank you :)

And I thank you. :)

[dyne7]

really enjoy your use of word economy, coupled with your choice in structure.

[YesNo]

Nice one. The sound kept me rereading it.

[cacian]

dyne7 and YesNo thanks for reading and commenting :)

[Marbles]

Wonderful poem, cacian.

[cacian]

Wonderful poem, cacian.

Marbles thank you:)