delicate

[cacian]

life is a delicate
flower
light comes to it every hour
and dark resumes it every nower
to shed
it power,
to pull it out
regardless
of its
endower
is a river
crying sour,
let it grow
plenty
will flow
and time
will redeem it
slow.
easy does it go.

[PeterL]

Nice, but life is like weed, a tough, persistent weed that keeps growing regardless of what one does to it. ;)

[cacian]

Nice, but life is like weed, a tough, persistent weed that keeps one regardless of what one does to it.

Peter I have to defend life and not call it weed haha.
one positive note leads to another positive note and then music is made. life is like that. :)

[PeterL]

Peter I have to defend life and not call it weed haha.
one positive note leads to another positive note and then music is made. life is like that. :)

But it was positive to liken life to a weed. ANd this is the fourth positive note. ;)

[cacian]

But it was positive to liken life to a weed. ANd this is the fourth positive note. ;)

what happened to the third note?

[PeterL]

what happened to the third note?


You were good enough to provide it. :)