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Soulwitch
05-28-2014, 09:13 PM
This is an old rough draft of my poem i hope you like it.......

Nothing but precious days fly by.
Was there NOTHING from the start?
NOTHING makes me wonder why,
why NOTHING heals a broken heart

NOTHING keeps me up all night.
Exactly NOTHING holds you back.
NOTHING makes us have a fight.
NOTHING helped me pack.

NOTHING caused lot of pain.
NOTHING...NOTHING but red
Nothing has driven us insane.
NOTHING can drown the words we've said.
If theres NOTHING, why am i standing here?
Is that Nothing in our embrace?
Is NOTHING why i shed a tear?
When I know NOTHING can take your place.

NOTHING will change my love for you.
Atleast, NOTHING but NOTHING will.
There is NOTHING anyone can do.
NOTHING to change the way i feel.



Like i said this is a rough drft from years ago its been upgraded a bit but esentially says what it means enjoy.

YesNo
05-28-2014, 10:43 PM
I like the repeated use of "NOTHING". Nothing does seem to drive us insane.