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miyako73
05-23-2014, 04:23 PM
She came to me at midnight,
showing the half-green tangerine
she kissed before giving it for peeling
and then she was gone like all other nights.

I peeled her fruit, soft solid, dry, no seeds,
and bitter even without my lips tasting
for I did not want my hard tongue
to lose its inaudible language.

WolfLarsen
05-24-2014, 07:17 PM
First reliance are my favorite. Actually, the first reliance are my favorite.. This young trying to write with this God damn voice recognition software.

Okay let's try again.

The first three lines were my favorite.

Okay, finally got it!

YesNo
05-24-2014, 08:06 PM
The theme of refusing the gift of a muse is interesting.