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cacian
05-23-2014, 03:34 PM
happy
is a word
I cajole
I dream of when it will crawl out
and flaunt
every scene out its minute small
a second would blush from the light
it spawns
but love
is a word
I adore
because it reminds of when I saw
you fall
head over hill over my
every call
your meaning epitomised it all
a stone would appear to inscript its scroll.

YesNo
05-23-2014, 03:43 PM
A very happy sounding poem. I liked the change from the expected phrase "head over heels" to "head over hill".

cacian
05-23-2014, 04:41 PM
A very happy sounding poem. I liked the change from the expected phrase "head over heels" to "head over hill".

YesNo thank you for reading :)