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cacian
05-03-2014, 04:37 PM
here is one I wrote earlier:

this is for you
Johnny
you are my night and day
no matter what you say
I love you more then may


your turn now :D

Jack of Hearts
05-03-2014, 05:07 PM
Johnny
this is for you
even though you make me blue,
love you more then cacian
could ever do.

cacian
05-03-2014, 05:10 PM
Johnny
this is for you
even though you make me blue,
love you more then cacian
could ever do.

LOL that is not fair haha :D

PeterL
05-03-2014, 06:23 PM
Brightening the Stars

To me there is nothing except you.
Why would anyone notice anything else?
The Moon is a pale shadow next to you.
The Sun is a twenty watt bulb beside you.
The universe fits inside your palm.
And nothing could distract me from you.
Stars are cold reflections of your éclat.
And now the planets revolve around you.

And my life revolves around you,

colb2
05-03-2014, 07:13 PM
The light of my day
My eyes never betray
You i'd carry away
Like ravishing prey
Just point the way
Then watch this miracle play

free
05-04-2014, 03:29 AM
TO MY HUSBAND NOT MET YET

My love for you

Is strong and true

Nobody must be so firm in love

Written below or above

As you and me

Because others know and see

To whom their love is sent

Except us so pure, so innocent

Mohammad Ahmad
05-04-2014, 05:29 AM
To you all
I love you as I love my parent
Thus in passion there is no deterrent
A literature family of a high esteem
Zealously take part as one team
Without you indeed I am forgotten
And no doubt my soul shall be rotten
To see my night is just flickering stage
Oh! Tell me which night, shall I encage?
Thereto I am in debt to you, as I need sun
Aurora once steals my tone
You are the lamp of my desert
Amidst of loss it gives me a rest

colb2
05-04-2014, 06:09 AM
Had a great time matching Free's rhyme pattern and syllable count!

When you cross through

My mouth shall spew

Exactly how I plan to belove

Which others never speak of

Are you for me

Never question what could be

Or you might just resent

The time with me that was left unspent

cacian
05-04-2014, 01:18 PM
it is written in the stars
you are my first and last
and should you ever ask
the skies beyond the mars
about us in the past
you will see it cast
the answer on a mast
of clouds painted on a blast
memory never gast.