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cacian
05-03-2014, 04:37 PM
here is one I wrote earlier:
this is for you
Johnny
you are my night and day
no matter what you say
I love you more then may
your turn now :D
Jack of Hearts
05-03-2014, 05:07 PM
Johnny
this is for you
even though you make me blue,
love you more then cacian
could ever do.
cacian
05-03-2014, 05:10 PM
Johnny
this is for you
even though you make me blue,
love you more then cacian
could ever do.
LOL that is not fair haha :D
PeterL
05-03-2014, 06:23 PM
Brightening the Stars
To me there is nothing except you.
Why would anyone notice anything else?
The Moon is a pale shadow next to you.
The Sun is a twenty watt bulb beside you.
The universe fits inside your palm.
And nothing could distract me from you.
Stars are cold reflections of your éclat.
And now the planets revolve around you.
And my life revolves around you,
colb2
05-03-2014, 07:13 PM
The light of my day
My eyes never betray
You i'd carry away
Like ravishing prey
Just point the way
Then watch this miracle play
TO MY HUSBAND NOT MET YET
My love for you
Is strong and true
Nobody must be so firm in love
Written below or above
As you and me
Because others know and see
To whom their love is sent
Except us so pure, so innocent
Mohammad Ahmad
05-04-2014, 05:29 AM
To you all
I love you as I love my parent
Thus in passion there is no deterrent
A literature family of a high esteem
Zealously take part as one team
Without you indeed I am forgotten
And no doubt my soul shall be rotten
To see my night is just flickering stage
Oh! Tell me which night, shall I encage?
Thereto I am in debt to you, as I need sun
Aurora once steals my tone
You are the lamp of my desert
Amidst of loss it gives me a rest
colb2
05-04-2014, 06:09 AM
Had a great time matching Free's rhyme pattern and syllable count!
When you cross through
My mouth shall spew
Exactly how I plan to belove
Which others never speak of
Are you for me
Never question what could be
Or you might just resent
The time with me that was left unspent
cacian
05-04-2014, 01:18 PM
it is written in the stars
you are my first and last
and should you ever ask
the skies beyond the mars
about us in the past
you will see it cast
the answer on a mast
of clouds painted on a blast
memory never gast.
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