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tomta20012
04-29-2014, 11:48 AM
The girl jumped to her feet with renewed vigour. "Lets go and finish this," she suddenly said wiping her eyes even though her tears had been instantly turned to stream the moment they were shed.

Can someone show me how to write this like a professional lol

Ruben Meijerink
04-29-2014, 05:30 PM
http://www.berfrois.com/2011/03/excalibur-by-david-brent/