proposal

[cacian]

life is a proposal of thoughts
we question ins and oughts
a reason's gone catapult
endless is born a cult
why we are
and to wards
what ideals must
we herd
we linger through
our faults
quizz mechanics
of our mort
to a death toll of sort
physics do us polled
we hang to it rolled
a clock chime is heard scold
we vengance to our fords
Harrison could have bored
everything has to sold
a wheeling to be hold
or else
it's a dulled
intimate shys assault
we are doomed to stay
taunt
our ideas have us annoyant.

[colb2]

Very nice, recently wrote a shorter version on a similar topic.. you captured much more although!

[cacian]

colb2 thank you.
do you have the shorter version?

[colb2]

Sorry, I should of forwarded the shorter version, but I am glad to see you found it and liked. I will continue to post on the same thread as I have numerous ideas.