Sorrow

[Mohammad Ahmad]

Sorrow
I tore up my sorrow
I removed my sorrow
Let it going up mountains
Let it invert slippery slope and died
To be as a gliding tone then stopped
To be smoothed in the sun
To never it has aches
To never its worms pinches
Is sorrow touchable?
Indeed, there is sorrow
Everywhere there is abuse
Everywhere there is death
Everywhere there is birth
But there is no freedom
Even if the slavery has been dated up,
Yet it comes as a new fashionable red light
Somewhere its gaps drafted and marched
In the marshes it was immersed
With our water it was immersed
Can't it be drinkable?
I know that something is wrong
Perhaps something in this life is wrong
. Yet there is a swan song
Yet there is friendship may prolong
Yet neighbours to neighbours long
Let them burned the sun
But not to burn up our fashionable moon

[cacian]

interesting piece Mohammad sorrow is a a very much a day to day feeling.

nice lines here:
I know that something is wrong
Perhaps something in this life is wrong
. Yet there is a swan song
Yet there is friendship may prolong
Yet neighbours to neighbours long
Let them burned the sun
But not to burn up our fashionable moon

although what is the swan song I wonder :)

[Mohammad Ahmad]

Thank you Cacian, that is nice from you
Swan song:
It is the final performance of a person's career; last piece of work of an artist or composer; so that I think it is mainly in music.
Its further exact meaning: the last piece should the artist produce before his death.
I employed the item here to end sorrow i.e. as a sweet conclusion
Swan alone : it means northern constellation \\ waterbird
Look to the English language how it has subtle expressions.
Knowing to use language is itself a masterpiece
Thank you again, you yourself have illuminated my words