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cacian
04-18-2014, 08:08 AM
infatuation
is a salutation
to despair
frivole to it
blare
give into
it
and it's a
tare
of the imagination and flair
desire fair
it entertains and square
nothing to an air
rare stares
to remind you life cares.
forever bares.

Iain Sparrow
04-18-2014, 01:53 PM
This has inspired me... I like the quirky and abrupt style of your poem.

In the soon to be poetry duel between myself and Pendragon, I will employ such a style in my first poem.:)

cacian
04-19-2014, 04:33 AM
Iain thank you for reading glad this piece has inspired you.
I look forward to the duel. I may even join you if that is OK.