teggie
04-13-2014, 06:52 PM
I just starting writing on a novel about a philosophy of Love and Fear. Basically, it will incorporate the powers of the mind, perception, equality, love, and many other aspects that tie together inside one's thought process. I hope to make the world aware of a new age of thinking with the novel that intends, in the future, to bring the world closer to terms like Love and Peace.
What I'm looking for here is types of criticism like how well this start falls together (or doesn't), if you can understand the reasoning behind my ideals (or not), bits that might motivate me in solidifying each individual topic, as well as your feeling on how well these ideals can be thought upon and be applied to one's thinking.
Any other kind of critique you might find necessary to aid this process is certainly welcome. I hope to post updates of the novel and have a general amount of followers that find interest in inspiring me through their own personal philosophies.
LOVE AND FEAR
Everything in this Universe is something brought through the purities, Love and
Fear. Love and Fear, the most simplistic yet most powerful feelings, are the colliding
forces that brought about The Universe. An infinite purity that conflicted with an
oppositely infinite purity. How tragic a concept it is, just reading it can subdue a
realistic mind's interest.
We are raised, from birth, in a manner that fashions our interests through that of
common mediums. Such mediums, for example, are: the media, parents, friends, government,
and many outspread sources. When do we come to a point where what we believe in is
sculpted from our own, individual ideas? To understand this concept, I will have the
pleasure of releasing the constraints society has burdened upon thee, so that you may open
your mind and see a better world.
Remember, I cannot release you from constrained thinking by providing a medium of
interest. If I did this, it would contradict the idea of open-mindedness and free thinking
because your mind would still be acting off outside information. The goal here is to bring
your mind to a state where your beliefs are tied to your own original ideas and thoughts.
I intend to awaken a Power that lies within the recesses of your mind, rather than
provide a genre these ideals can dwell in.
It is true, we ultimately choose what to believe in based of the relevance of
opinions and facts presented to us. Ask yourself, "How many of these opinions and facts
have I proven true through my own experience with them?" For example, many people believe
in God, or don't, by experience with ideals they see relevant to believe. Some people
question God's existence when experiencing rough times, while others look to Him for
guidance. Why is it others' faith are affected and others' faith might not be so easily
afflicted?
Even though, we are presented reasoning to believe in God, our experience effects
this medium's reasoning. So, what we see on a day to day basis is the key factor that
molds the beliefs of our mediums. It is how we interpret these experiences that sway
reasoning, so to speak. This is called perception. What we perceive is the ultimately what
we believe and what we believe is as well what we perceive.
The trick here is to be able to intercept what we perceive with a mindset that
makes us able to. Our mindset, what we believe and how we have come to believe these
things, is another word for subconscious. Our subconscious is the determinant that separates
purities from falsities, or otherwise divides our beliefs. In order to effect our
perception, so that we can control the flow of ideals through our through process, we must
first understand the way our subconscious is intertwined with our reality.
'Subconscious'
Imagine an empty library. There are no books in this library, but there are
thousands of shelves. The books to be placed on these shelves are individuals thoughts.
Within these thoughts, or books, are individual ideas that build each individual thought.
These thoughts are organized into individual categories that we can call beliefs. So you
may possess a series of ideas that make a thought and a series of thought that make an
intricate belief.
One of the ways I personally have helped myself to understand the vast nature of
the subconscious is nature itself. "My mind is a resilient tree, with branches that expend
outwards infinitely in the space of the Universe. Over the skin of these branches lay
leaves of illustrious colour and divinity in all shapes and sizes. This tree will continue
to flourish through life and through death."
An idea is the purest form of creation in terms of thoughts, and therefore can
never be changed. However, it can always be added upon or removed from its placement in
your mind. The same reasoning applies for thoughts in terms of beliefs. This ties into
such a variet of Universal aspects that only you can determine how to apply such a
critical thought process. With this being said, I hope to make it easier to conclude the
train of your instincts.
By this point, you may or may not be able to piece together the process it takes
to interpret your thoughts, or beliefs, to a more understandably coherent picture. You
have a feeling it is necessary to believe in God, but you cannot wrap your head around
the concept. The reasoning behind this jurisdiction, at this point, is your most important
asset. You want to believe in God, but you don't know how to perceive such a deity. What
matters right now, is possessing the tools to achieve this want. 'Want' is where we shall
start.
Whatever it is you believe in, I'm positive it should not affect the widespread
opinion that want (and not wanting) is the motivation behind any means of action.
Thank you for reading. I await your feedback, and am eager to post future updates of the novel.
What I'm looking for here is types of criticism like how well this start falls together (or doesn't), if you can understand the reasoning behind my ideals (or not), bits that might motivate me in solidifying each individual topic, as well as your feeling on how well these ideals can be thought upon and be applied to one's thinking.
Any other kind of critique you might find necessary to aid this process is certainly welcome. I hope to post updates of the novel and have a general amount of followers that find interest in inspiring me through their own personal philosophies.
LOVE AND FEAR
Everything in this Universe is something brought through the purities, Love and
Fear. Love and Fear, the most simplistic yet most powerful feelings, are the colliding
forces that brought about The Universe. An infinite purity that conflicted with an
oppositely infinite purity. How tragic a concept it is, just reading it can subdue a
realistic mind's interest.
We are raised, from birth, in a manner that fashions our interests through that of
common mediums. Such mediums, for example, are: the media, parents, friends, government,
and many outspread sources. When do we come to a point where what we believe in is
sculpted from our own, individual ideas? To understand this concept, I will have the
pleasure of releasing the constraints society has burdened upon thee, so that you may open
your mind and see a better world.
Remember, I cannot release you from constrained thinking by providing a medium of
interest. If I did this, it would contradict the idea of open-mindedness and free thinking
because your mind would still be acting off outside information. The goal here is to bring
your mind to a state where your beliefs are tied to your own original ideas and thoughts.
I intend to awaken a Power that lies within the recesses of your mind, rather than
provide a genre these ideals can dwell in.
It is true, we ultimately choose what to believe in based of the relevance of
opinions and facts presented to us. Ask yourself, "How many of these opinions and facts
have I proven true through my own experience with them?" For example, many people believe
in God, or don't, by experience with ideals they see relevant to believe. Some people
question God's existence when experiencing rough times, while others look to Him for
guidance. Why is it others' faith are affected and others' faith might not be so easily
afflicted?
Even though, we are presented reasoning to believe in God, our experience effects
this medium's reasoning. So, what we see on a day to day basis is the key factor that
molds the beliefs of our mediums. It is how we interpret these experiences that sway
reasoning, so to speak. This is called perception. What we perceive is the ultimately what
we believe and what we believe is as well what we perceive.
The trick here is to be able to intercept what we perceive with a mindset that
makes us able to. Our mindset, what we believe and how we have come to believe these
things, is another word for subconscious. Our subconscious is the determinant that separates
purities from falsities, or otherwise divides our beliefs. In order to effect our
perception, so that we can control the flow of ideals through our through process, we must
first understand the way our subconscious is intertwined with our reality.
'Subconscious'
Imagine an empty library. There are no books in this library, but there are
thousands of shelves. The books to be placed on these shelves are individuals thoughts.
Within these thoughts, or books, are individual ideas that build each individual thought.
These thoughts are organized into individual categories that we can call beliefs. So you
may possess a series of ideas that make a thought and a series of thought that make an
intricate belief.
One of the ways I personally have helped myself to understand the vast nature of
the subconscious is nature itself. "My mind is a resilient tree, with branches that expend
outwards infinitely in the space of the Universe. Over the skin of these branches lay
leaves of illustrious colour and divinity in all shapes and sizes. This tree will continue
to flourish through life and through death."
An idea is the purest form of creation in terms of thoughts, and therefore can
never be changed. However, it can always be added upon or removed from its placement in
your mind. The same reasoning applies for thoughts in terms of beliefs. This ties into
such a variet of Universal aspects that only you can determine how to apply such a
critical thought process. With this being said, I hope to make it easier to conclude the
train of your instincts.
By this point, you may or may not be able to piece together the process it takes
to interpret your thoughts, or beliefs, to a more understandably coherent picture. You
have a feeling it is necessary to believe in God, but you cannot wrap your head around
the concept. The reasoning behind this jurisdiction, at this point, is your most important
asset. You want to believe in God, but you don't know how to perceive such a deity. What
matters right now, is possessing the tools to achieve this want. 'Want' is where we shall
start.
Whatever it is you believe in, I'm positive it should not affect the widespread
opinion that want (and not wanting) is the motivation behind any means of action.
Thank you for reading. I await your feedback, and am eager to post future updates of the novel.