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Delta40
03-25-2014, 07:06 PM
That night, he wallowed in the memories
of his childhood
like the persistent clicks of cicadas
little knowing
they were a plague of locusts
eating through his field of dreams.
Hey dude, there's a storm on its way
and we all looked up except for him.
He'd already been struck down years before
which put him on the path to spirits
and a well packed pipe for 'insight'.
When the thunder rolled
echoes of past fans screamed his name
and for a glowing slow motion second
he found eternal contentment.
Yo! It's your turn to get the Beams from the fridge.
Bolts of lightning flashed across the sky
and he shimmered at the strobe effect
knowing this was his '3,2,1 and you're on' cue
So he swooned, with light Beams onto the stage
where his 'audience' was waiting
and took a bow because the truth was
he had only ever wanted to entertain us.
There was a mighty crack of thunder
when I told him our Dad was a c unt.
Glass shattered on the verandah
The clicking noise stopped
then came a heavy downpour.

Jerrybaldy
03-26-2014, 07:09 PM
One of your best IMHO (where has Bar gone?) Hard hitting with s real edge to it, I really enjoyed the read.

Delta40
03-27-2014, 05:26 PM
It would be nice to hear from her. Thanks for the review x

Hawkman
03-27-2014, 06:59 PM
That is seriously good quality Delta.

Live and be well - H

qimissung
03-27-2014, 10:11 PM
I like it.

Delta40
03-28-2014, 02:16 AM
Thanks kindly Hawk and Qimi.

AuntShecky
03-28-2014, 05:20 PM
You don't need comments from the likes o' yours fooly, Delta dear. That goes for Jerry, too.

Delta40
03-28-2014, 09:37 PM
Of course I do! Thanks for reading auntie