True Beauty

[MissionTech]

Please critique :)

a ray of light shines from the sky
reveling a beautiful landscape
two great mountains stand covered in
ran a shallow lucid stream
gliding over its rocky bottom
encompassed by limitless forestry
created by no man
completely natural
this is true beauty

[MorpheusSandman]

Wrong forum. Your own poetry goes in the Personal Poetry forum; this forum is for talking about established poets and their poems.

[MissionTech]

Sorry!