happiness

[cacian]

a beautiful thought can go a long way
so long it sticks out from the wrongs
you see one and you are strong
a not-so can breed over and over so much
seed
everytime one drops it weeds
thick is the feed
you see one and you're heed less of your need
spare a word a wrought and say it neat
the effect is feast and everyone does Keat
happiness in the mead.

[PeterL]

delicious

[Mohammad Ahmad]

seed everytime one drops it weeds ... Fine ... Fine .. Fine
Oh! On earth what enjoyable climate it is!

[cacian]

thank you both very much :)

[free]

Nice poem, cacian. I am surprised I haven't seen it already and joined to the positive comments.

[cacian]

Nice poem, cacian. I am surprised I haven't seen it already and joined to the positive comments.

free you are very kind thank you for reading :)