lawful awful

[cacian]

don't break the law
because you think you saw
break the law because you think you know
disperse the flow to
avoid the blow
keep your head over go
none is above the so
nature's claw
is top slow and grow
forever unbending of whether
it appears but the cycle
to near is one and never
iridescent and none
imagine and it shows

[PeterL]

Head down to avoid Nature’s claw

The iron law of cause and effect rules.

My ill-chosen words may catch in my craw,

Subconscious’ words its only overt tools.

Ruled by cause and effect, mind talks to soul

Soul drives spirit; all strive toward goal.

There is no failure for the world is whole.

Regardless of all else, each has a role.

[cacian]

very nice Peter I enjoyed reading your poem.

[PeterL]

very nice Peter I enjoyed reading your poem.

I am glad that you enjoyed it.

[YesNo]

I liked the sound of yours, cacian, especially, "forever unbending of whether". I think I understood PeterL's underlying metaphysics in his response poem better, but I may not have understood anything.

[PeterL]

but I may not have understood anything.

That is true of all of us all of the time.

[cacian]

I liked the sound of yours, cacian, especially, "forever unbending of whether". I think I understood PeterL's underlying metaphysics in his response poem better, but I may not have understood anything.

thank you YesNo glad you liked the sound of mine ;)