Syrian Sonnet

[miyako73]

bang! bang! pap! pap! bang! pap! bang! pap! pap! bang!
ratatat! tsing! ratatat! tattat! tsing!
tap! pang! pang! tap! tap! tap! pang! tap! pang! pang!
kliktiktik! tik! ping! ping! kliktiktik! ping!
ratatat! ping! tat! kliktiktik! tik! tsing!
brupa! brupa! pew! brupa! pew! brupa!
kliktiktik! tsing! tik! ratatat! tat! ping!
taka! taka! pap! pap! taka! taka!
pala! tap! pala! tap! pala! pala!
bap! bap! po! bap! po! bap! po! bap! bap! po!
plapla! pew! plapla! pew! plapla! plapla!
tang! ow! tang! tang! ow! tang! ow! tang! tang! ow!
bam! boom! boom! bam! boom! bam! bam! boom! kaboom!





Miyako

(c) 1/25/2014

[Mohammad Ahmad]

Does it Sanskrit?
I don't blame anyone to write a funny style.
I don't want to stand as a stumbling block opposing others as someone lastly bothers me to say that he his first forty years spent on rhyming but when I looked for his profile I was astonished to find out his age is 48 years, furthermore, I saw no new posts to him but only replies.
For you, I think you made it too much ambiguity, you excessively repeat.
Just I want to see your brilliant posts.
best regards

[miyako73]

These are sounds of guns. I listened to the different sounds of those guns just for this poem that follows the sonnet form. the 14th line is invisible echo and silence. the literary device is onomatopoeia. thanks for reading.