Silence

[hannah_arendt]

I missed you all my life.
I couldn`t find any simpler word to emphasize the sense of loss.
I even didn`t expect to find.
And there were you,
In the mists of remote, lonely mountain,
cowardly waiting for the beginning,
never to happen.
Then I saw the mob,
a wind of discontent which earlier had been terrifying me in dreams.
I knew that nothing would occur,
pitchy movement of my heart and the thought that that day wouldn`t happen again.

[Jerrybaldy]

Hi Hannah. I would end it at line seven, but that is just my thought of course.

In line two you may need "words" rather than "word" . Line four may read better
as "there you were" .

Some nice lines though, Hannah.

[Buh4Bee]

Like the source of inspiration! Happy correspondence. Enjoyed.

[hannah_arendt]

Thanks :)