ode to jack of hearts

[Jerrybaldy]

Jack, oh Jack
I love you like a long lost friend
With a mole I never noticed before.
It talks to me in tongues
Then licks your lips.
Jack oh Jack
Forever come back.
You feel you are no longer here anymore.

[Jack of Hearts]

It's important to hedge all criticism. That said, this is the greatest poem LitNet has ever seen.






J

[qimissung]

What a paean to a friend! I think I'm jealous, except for the mole part. :D

[jajdude]

Dammit Jack, I thought I wrote the best one ever.

Jack, he speaks like silence,
Without ideals or violence..

He knows too much to argue or to judge.

Remember when I wrote that on my album "Bringing It All Jack Home" ?

[DocHeart]

Aw. :)

All of my favourite folk in one thread.

Sambuka all round!

[Buh4Bee]

I was tickled by this exchange as well!