Poetry Collection: Form in Text, Text in Form

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[Calidore]

I like "Buttered" the best. The Shakespeare one reminds me of Wolf.

Some of these I would think fall more under visual art than poetry, but I'm also under the impression that the rules of what constitutes poetry are pretty flexible. Don't care either way, myself; it's creative regardless.

[miyako73]

Thanks, Cal. Been trying to do this. I think the time has come. hehehe

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[cacian]

Hemingway's Last Short Story




A famous writer,
sick and depressed,
accidentally shot himself
while cleaning his gun.






(c) 1/20/2014

is that a real short story by Hemingway?

[miyako73]

That's how his life ended.

[cacian]

That's how his life ended.

wow I never knew that. did you write that?

[cacian]

A Love..'s Dilemma
r .......




..
ove
L...........



..ust







(c) 1/20/2014

I think lust is dilemma.
to love is something else.

[cacian]

The Womb Is A Desolate Universe









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(c) 1/20/2014
the womb? it is only desolate when it is not in use.
otherwise it is quite a busy thing. lol

[cacian]

Free the Words








+








(c) 1/20/2014

interesting title but I am not how a PLUS sign does that.

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interesting title but I am not how a PLUS sign does that.


http://i1311.photobucket.com/albums/s672/miyako1973/959129fe-10c0-477e-b546-b50ede807fde_zpsc2ecfcc2.jpg (http://s1311.photobucket.com/user/miyako1973/media/959129fe-10c0-477e-b546-b50ede807fde_zpsc2ecfcc2.jpg.html)

[miyako73]

I think lust is dilemma.
to love is something else.

The Dilemma: if L goes to ust r will go to ove to become over.

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[cacian]

http://i1311.photobucket.com/albums/s672/miyako1973/959129fe-10c0-477e-b546-b50ede807fde_zpsc2ecfcc2.jpg (http://s1311.photobucket.com/user/miyako1973/media/959129fe-10c0-477e-b546-b50ede807fde_zpsc2ecfcc2.jpg.html)

lOL I like that.

[cacian]

The Dilemma: if L goes to ust r will go to ove to become over.

Ah. so r and l do a swap. I see. so that's Rust and Love. then.

[miyako73]

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[miyako73]

Sorry I have to delete all these. A friend's friend, who works for a publishing firm, saw my works. He advised me to take them off Online for possible publication. He promised to help me. Sorry again. And thank you for letting me share the tinkering part of my mind. I had fun. I hope you had too.

[JCamilo]

Good luck :D

So, basically, in years to come literature guides will analyse how the Emperor new Sonnet had influence on your work and try to understand the unusual syntax of the blankness poetic movement while a posters will fight over the meanings behind your visual poetry, perhaps showing it was all about something as the hunt of Osama, as his body vanishes like the words?

The future can be fun...

[miyako73]

That's too much a reading, JCamilo. I 'll never quit hoping, you know. I'm not starting a literary movement or whatever. I hope to start a conversation in my poetry. Villa may have influenced me, but I have gone further--tinkering, conceptualizing, all that.