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cacian
01-19-2014, 11:23 AM
i scribble words
and they appear
blurred
the grammar sucks
them slurred
whichever way they
spur

and so i create
a circ
without the perk
of twists and murk
of commas dots
semi columns and stops

fluent is
dropped
in and out
of blot
but clear visibly slot
robotic proc

the beauty
of a not
is that it appears a lot
in precision mot

PeterL
01-19-2014, 05:14 PM
Interesting

cacian
01-20-2014, 05:13 AM
Interesting

thank you PeterL I want to ask do you write poetry?

Delta40
01-20-2014, 05:56 AM
Why not write,

The grammary
Is like a mammary
Sucked and slurred

To get your point across?

PeterL
01-20-2014, 08:28 AM
thank you PeterL I want to ask do you write poetry?

I only very rarely do anything that could be called poetry, but recently I decided to write some lyric poetry.

cacian
01-20-2014, 09:20 AM
Why not write,

The grammary
Is like a mammary
Sucked and slurred

To get your point across?

haha great lines Delta it is very unlike you but I like them :D

cacian
01-20-2014, 09:21 AM
I only very rarely do anything that could be called poetry, but recently I decided to write some lyric poetry.

sounds cool. why not share them?

PeterL
01-20-2014, 09:54 AM
sounds cool. why not share them?

I may, if anything comes of it.