nostalgia

[cacian]

your perfume
is part of my assume
i scent it and it fills
me up
with lures
i imagine you are pure
and I beside you dure
any situation
cure
but after
you appear
i see you it with austere
unsure i always
fear
to doubt you may infere
my feelings i have
reared
for you to keep undear

your presence changes
fast
i never knew what last
time is a hurdled past
as tearful as its casts
shadows unpon its mast
darkness is fallen task

and so to keep
you up with past
your memory is here
but your being
is steer
away me from me and near

[PeterL]

Nice but there's no reason to fear.

[YesNo]

I liked the last stanza the best, especially the last line with the contrast of being away and near at the same time.

[cacian]

Nice but there's no reason to fear.

fear? well a bit of fear goes a long way but I think I see what you mean.

[cacian]

I liked the last stanza the best, especially the last line with the contrast of being away and near at the same time.

YesNo thank you :)