escape

[cacian]

i lie not to myself
but to me
i tell the truth
and i am free
not to be but to see
all the wrongs i flee
life to get to me
serious has to
be
i simply turn to see
escape never to be

[miyako73]

"i lie not to myself
but to me"

you just wanted to use the stale "I, me, and myself" unholy trinity. C'mon, Cacian, you should be in high school poetry by now. It's 2014 already; discard the wordplay.

[cacian]

hi miyako73 and nice to see you around.:)
about unholy trinity I did not at any point realised I did the sacrimonius trio haha :D
now you said it how to discard it is another matter. I may try a different way to start and thank you I always appreciate your comments and reading :)