No Flow

[Delta40]

As soon as there is no Flo
this is where I stop
staggering home
from the Beggars Arms
stepping through pools of vomit
and chunks of carrot.

Where there is no Flo
this is where I stop
inhaling cheap scent
hairspray
and tobacco sunrises
that coat your front door.

When there is no Flo
this is where I stop
feeding from the fruits
in your bowl
or rolling in the sheets
of your half dreamed desires.

[MystyrMystyry]

Posted New Year's Eve? Interesting on various levels. I hear a blues guitar jangling :)

[cacian]

hi Delta this is in no way a criticism just I noticed this is the second poem I think this weelk you have started with AS.
I say that because I vowed myself not to ever start a poem with AS :D
the ''Beggers Arms'' are the pubs in Australia called the same as in England?
can I ask why you spelt Flo ?
a very cool piece :)

[Delta40]

Not to ever a poem? So you'll miss out complete words, chop them in half and even invent them but not use 'As' at the beginning.

Lol. Meet me in London next month?

[cacian]

Not to ever a poem? So you'll miss out complete words, chop them in half and even invent them but not use 'As' at the beginning.

haha I know what you mean it is just I decided not to anymore for some weird reason. I noticed I did it a lot and so it is one thing I kept aware of and still do. :D

Lol. Meet me in London next month?
you are coming to London next month? really?

[Delta40]

Yes I will be cacian. Here is your second chance!

[cacian]

Yes I will be cacian. Here is your second chance!

excellent haha. send me details via message and I will set it all up on time to meet you. will look forward to it. will send my home address and phone number mobile to ensure we meet. if I am not there you will know where I am haha :)

[Delta40]

Ok I will.

[cacian]

Ok I will.
cool :)