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free
12-22-2013, 03:32 PM
And then I heard you
Whispering
On a rainy day
Walking barefooted
Slushing and wading
In the plashes

What are you doing
In this place, anyway
So early in the morning
While I eat donuts
Made by my valet

You inhale their smell
Or, perhaps
You want
To taste the yogurt
Spilled on the floor

In the evening you will be transformed
Into a brave and handsome man
I know
Kissing some girl's hand
Gallant and elegant

But what are you doing
In the morning
In this place
Following me
Like a dog

Jerrybaldy
12-22-2013, 08:04 PM
Beautiful distain and imagery.

Delta40
12-23-2013, 05:48 AM
Sigh. There are a few (just a few) litnutters whose style I wish I could mimic...

free
12-23-2013, 08:12 AM
Thank you Jerry and Delta for your comments.

free
12-25-2013, 05:23 AM
I don't think I met you without reason
My make-up is meant to attract you
No matter how you understand the world
This is what I think about it

Go and live your life
Watch the world with whatever eyes you have
And there is no way
That I will turst you
Before we drink some wine together

For I am the Dionysus
That proves himself by his own means
The ships we sail on are made of glasses

And, yes!
Don't forget to live!