Anomandaris
11-25-2013, 04:02 PM
This is some experimental flow of counsiosness, I'm new to it so please don't judge me too hard, but I'd love to see some criticism so I can improve myself :smilewinkgrin:
In cold rain,snow and darkness
And in chilling, bitter wind…
I wonder where are you -
All I can hear is your sough…
Let the wind carry you home
You lost,black cloud.
Blow,blow,my faithfull wind,
Blow away those memories of ashe…
In late autumn,in sorrow and mourn
And in petrifying thoughts…
Soon we will be joined
Though you took my words purloined…
In cold rain,snow and darkness
And in chilling, bitter wind…
I wonder where are you -
All I can hear is your sough…
Let the wind carry you home
You lost,black cloud.
Blow,blow,my faithfull wind,
Blow away those memories of ashe…
In late autumn,in sorrow and mourn
And in petrifying thoughts…
Soon we will be joined
Though you took my words purloined…