poems inspired by fellowLitNet poems

[cacian]

why not post a poem you wrote that was inspired by a fellowLitNet poem or simply themselves here.
inspiration comes from without to within.
look forward to reading :)

note to the mods: this was meant for the Contest Poetry Forum. If it could be moved that would be greatly. thanks!

[free]

Cacian, you are full of excellent ideas! I support this one. Here is my poem about 'someone' from here. :)

You write nicely
But, oh, dear!
I don't know how do you look
How do you cook.

Your smiles are all over the poems
And stories you kindly write
Offering the reading pleasures to everyone here
But, oh, dear!

I don't know do you have teeth
Underneath.

Nevertheless,
I am always looking forward
To meet you around
Safe and sound.

[cacian]

free great piece indeed!!! glad you support this idea :)

[Jerrybaldy]

MM

I was walking along and me head fell off
It made I cough
And cough
And cough
Me phlegm was pink
When it waltzed down the sink.

Jack.

Delete.

Cacian.

Fluff went puff
To settle
Petal
Ignoring swam
Once after
Marmalade.

Biggus.

Roses are reddish
Violets are blueish
If I didn't know better
I`d swear you were Jewish.

Hillwalker.

I left for good reason.

Hawkman.

A sparrow. An arrow flies
as the crow flies.
Death for Robin redbreast.

PrinceMyshkin.

Am I still alive?
God.
There's a subject and a half.

Jack

Too slow. Deleted.

Auntie.

You are too good
To attempt.

Delta.

This is a metaphor
Within a metaphor
Wrapped up in a metaphor
That is so metaphoric
It is yet to look at itself and think
"Strewth, I'm a metaphor".

Me.

F uck
F uck
****.

Haunted.

My heart is in a ringer
And you dialed
911
As you left.

[cacian]

Cacian.

Fluff went puff
To settle
Petal
Ignoring swam
Once after
Marmalade.

hehe Jerrybaldy this is wonderful :D

I enjoyed every poem you wrote excellent stuff :)

[cacian]

Jerryblady

your poetry 's
facety
reccurences
arty
to read it
is to
see
black
and white
tinted
all
colours
intended
classic feels ancient.

[EvoWarrior5]

I wanted to give this a try. It's not much good but hopefully still enjoyable:

I like his writing style.
Have done so for a while.
His short, well-flowing poetry,
His rhyme, metre, and symmetry.
It's catchy and it's memorable,
The metre is untouchable.
It makes me feel immersed
into YesNo and his verse.


Have you ever noticed
that, ironically,
the superlative version
“shortest”
is longer
than shorter?
In turn, short
is shorter
than shorter.
Reminds me of
Cacian’s writing:
new lines emerging
all over the place
short lines that flow
break off, yet unite.


And here an unfortunately very short one because I could not come up with an ironic, longer poem:

Melanie
equals
imagery

[cacian]

EvoWarrior5

your name inspires
me
it brings a new
agenda everyday
it is a joy to say
so keep on telling
to your poetry
a stunning :D