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chirpy
11-21-2013, 04:33 PM
My heart is like angels on your shoulder
conflicted on the brink of decisions.
If you saw me, could you swear and curse at
my beauty
or would you keep walking as if in a
different life we never even met

My bare feet could tell you a story but
the one written with your sighs in white steam
is more interesting to a tramp like
me

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Rebellious Youth
Silly girls, Hell hath no.
Apathetic Youth.
Flaming gays, butch ladies.
Beautiful Youth.
Make-up light, mind heavy.

Don't you see? Stop staring.
The world is always changing.


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thank you for your time :)

cacian
11-22-2013, 06:05 AM
Hi chirpy nice interesting poems.
I noticed you bear no titles on both. is that something you do often?
just wanted to ask about the second one, which I like best of the two,
what is ''Hell hath no''?
thanks :)

chirpy
11-22-2013, 11:36 PM
Thank you! Not titling things is something I do a lot...! and it's "Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned" :)

Jerrybaldy
11-25-2013, 07:11 PM
Enjoyed reading. The very first line was crying out to be like AN angel.

chirpy
12-05-2013, 04:22 PM
Thank you! Funnily enough I didn't even think about changing it to 'an angel'. I suppose it's the catholic in me thinking of the devil on the shoulder as a fallen angel. I think I was going for those first two lines to be read as the narrator divided on entering into a relationship and wanting the one the shoulders belong to decide.