may flowers

[cacian]

the flowers in may
they sway,
their colours play,
blue
to their feathers
red to their blaze,
a visual
weather,
to heather
that's a glaze
on haze
purity trickle
such daze is 'maze.

the flower in may
in winter they
bay
their coats,
typical of pale
stay,
they lay hidden
until ridden
of their coldest
mitten,
and then they out ,
bout to their south
they pout forever rout
beautiful is gout.

[Mohammad Ahmad]

Flowers of May
dazzle and play
as we go
one or two
our day is bright
we have delight
enjoying our day
under the sunray
come in with me
birds we see
look to the butterfly
to us saying hi!

[DocHeart]

Flowers of May
dazzle and play
as we go
one or two
our day is bright
we have delight
enjoying our day
under the sunray
come in with me
birds we see
look to the butterfly
to us saying hi!



You're Phoebe from Friends, aren't you?

[Mohammad Ahmad]

You're Phoebe from Friends, aren't you?
O, dear, there's no Phoebe in Iraq! I think you mean the "tyrant flycatcher" moreover, phoebe is a bird type, but I didn't see it.
phoebe is an American tyrant flycatcher with mainly grey-brown or blackish plumage.
Isn't it?

[dara.cv]

Hi Mohammed,

Good morning, nice to meet you, i hope to become good acquaintances on here. I actually work with a large Middle Eastern clientele. It is admirable how poetry is loved and praised in your culture compared to it's lessening popularity here in the States. I found it interesting that a strict rhythmic meter is demanded of your poetic expressions, there's no such thing as free verse right? I personally enjoy and prefer the traditions of structure, though, at times I try free verse to just let my emotions go and stream out of me as they wish. I think you should try it sometime, it might help you break free of the demands of meter and rhythm and focus instead on the artistic emotional expression. Being that free verse is the current trend here in the US it might help you gain experience in a different aspect of a foreign language.

[Mohammad Ahmad]

Hi Mohammed,

Good morning, nice to meet you, i hope to become good acquaintances on here. I actually work with a large Middle Eastern clientele. It is admirable how poetry is loved and praised in your culture compared to it's lessening popularity here in the States. I found it interesting that a strict rhythmic meter is demanded of your poetic expressions, there's no such thing as free verse right? I personally enjoy and prefer the traditions of structure, though, at times I try free verse to just let my emotions go and stream out of me as they wish. I think you should try it sometime, it might help you break free of the demands of meter and rhythm and focus instead on the artistic emotional expression. Being that free verse is the current trend here in the US it might help you gain experience in a different aspect of a foreign language.
Hi,
Excuse me for delaying, I haven't permanent attachment with internet in my home, I especially used to log on internet at official duty hours only from Sunday to Thursday and even if we have attachment with internet in our home but it is either weak current or paralyzed.
I would thank you more if you really decided to help me in scansion poetry, moreover I think that you really have guessed onto my opinion about the contemporary poetry, of course I don't like it but what I do if all members preferred it and according to people wishes I don't want so to speak singing out of swarm.