Adolescent09 -> 22 and Happy

[Adolescent09]

Darkness taught me a little game
called peak at hope and see it through
I searched for darkness, then for fame,
had all hope vanquished? for naught I grew

Church folk pitched their tents of words
My heart was too unkempt for growth
Then I played the game one night
and at 130+ mph it showed me light.

love, cheers and happiness in my comfort zone: the poetry corner

[cafolini]

Hello Adolescent. Glad you showed up. This is a sensible poem about your heart. Only a minority pitches tents of just words. Unfortunately, they are the ones that hog a lot of the attention.
We love you. May The Grace of God be with you in this exploration and discovery of your potentials.

[cacian]

hi Adolescent
darkeness is a dense matter, how does it come to teach anything is something I have yet to experience. not that I wish for it to teach me anything I am already learned. may be it should learn something from you and me.:)

[briefarchivist]

Darkness absorbs photons. Does that make it dense?

[Melanie]

I hope 130+ mph was not literal. Take care and take care of those in your path. I'm happy your happy.

[spally]

I really liked it