Oblivion

[Anomandaris]

I would like if I get some feedback, either possitive or negative, so I could improve myself and my poetry.

The night is black and creepy,
The night is cold as death’s embrace.
And liquid iron slowly fills
The earth’s ruptured chest…
Cold mirrors of reality, they behold
This frozen field.The black abyss
Is full of untold feelings and of unshared thoughts …
And oblivion engulfs it all…
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As days go by,my heart goes cold
And the dreams go on and on…
Dreams of carnage,dreams of cold,
Dreams of frozen ground and of history untold…
Heroes of times long gone,
Your sacrifice won't be in vain
Even if all the people turn away,
For you I shall forever mourn.