Forbidden Doors

[dara.cv]

Softly, knocking on a forbidden door.
With just the tips of your fingers brushed against her clasps
you beckoned it's opening.
The one you summoned
stood there
eyes wide with surprise.
You shut the door to prove yourself stronger.
Promptly forgot the day
you nearly revealed your intentions.
To what purpose did you find?
She never knew what had resided behind your closed doors.
And now it is known
and now it is suffered
knowing
That your bidding could be so easily answered.

[hannah_arendt]

Softly
knocking on a forbidden door.
With just the tips of your fingers
brushed against the clasps
,you beckoned its opening,
to the one you summoned
standing there
eyes wide with surprise.
You shut the door to prove yourself stronger.
Swiftly forgot the day
she nearly recognized your intentions.
To what purpose did you find?
She never knew what had reside.
And now it is known
and now it is suffered
knowing
That your bidding could be so easily answered.

Hi:)

I think that you sould at punctuation in this poem.

Maybe it would worth replacing 'forbidden' by other word?

I wish you more good ideas:)

[dara.cv]

Is this better Hannah? I originally posted in a rush with little refinement & editing. im open to any other suggestions or critique.