Sweet Tooth

[Bewlay Brother]

Please ignore this thread, and look at the poem "Her Life is Peachy" instead.

I revised the poem and now it's a lot different and the title sweet tooth doesn't fit at all anymore, and it wouldn't let me change the title.

[Jerrybaldy]

Not sure about super scraps but this is a deliciously dark piece.

[Bewlay Brother]

I see what you did there.

And actually, after making that connection, I think delicious is a better word choice than super. While super is mainly there for alliteration, to sound good, and to add a bit of a wacky tone to the poem, delicious sounds better than super does and it better establishes the theme of the poem.

Thank you.