hannah_arendt
10-10-2013, 05:16 AM
One more time, I would like to ask you for your opinions about my last text. Thanks in advance :)
Resurrection
World seen through the windows of polluted city
reminds first thoughts after awaiting
but at the same time disappointing resurrection,
when the dream of being freed
results to be replaced by the excruciating pain of being tore apart.
Children have always used to be seen as angels,
being said to be born impeccable flawless beings
as if virginity and naivety were synonyms.
Then happens nothing.
Time makes easier the rite of passing between the beginning and the end.
Even children,
as subconscious they are,
think about this day of paramount importance
when still unprepared,
tend to glance coquettishly.
Whereas their words
remind sounds of disappointed worshiper
seeing his beloved god
so human and weak that deprived of divinity and glory.
Resurrection
World seen through the windows of polluted city
reminds first thoughts after awaiting
but at the same time disappointing resurrection,
when the dream of being freed
results to be replaced by the excruciating pain of being tore apart.
Children have always used to be seen as angels,
being said to be born impeccable flawless beings
as if virginity and naivety were synonyms.
Then happens nothing.
Time makes easier the rite of passing between the beginning and the end.
Even children,
as subconscious they are,
think about this day of paramount importance
when still unprepared,
tend to glance coquettishly.
Whereas their words
remind sounds of disappointed worshiper
seeing his beloved god
so human and weak that deprived of divinity and glory.